Date: 2009-12-04 12:03 am (UTC)
i completely love this (these) fic(s). so powerful! you are definitely one of my favorite writers. i get super excited when i see one of yours pop up :) each "crack" had me wincing in sympathy (totally love the way you do that. the cracks in this one and in the corresponding part in rapture and the beeps in second star on the right, straight on til morning. which moved me so much i have been forcing people into reading it) dark and just the perfect amount of gritty, yet simply, painfully regal. also (the whole thing but mostly the first part of this and the first part of rapture naturally) totally reminded me of the first time i watched the crucible (which promptly lead to me reading it because it is genius) and it had me reduced to disbelieving tears as i screamed and chucked things at the screen before quickly calming down and declaring my eternal love for that play (and the movie and daniel day lewis because he really is a brilliant actor). i would be lying if i said this (these) did not get a similar reaction out of me. apparently i can be an overly emotional person when the writing/acting/whatever-it-is is fantastic. and anyone/thing that can actually make me cry with tears and blubbering and everything needs to be given some sort of award because my eyes (or my tear ducts rather) are such that tears rarely can actually come out (which is too weird but sadly true) so yeah... didn't really mean to ramble on forever like that, but yeah...
one last thought/comment: my very very very favorite line(s) were:
The king did not respond.

Neither did his father.

and that, THAT, was sheer *brilliance.*
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