I absolutely loved this ! The whole Merlin and Morgana interaction was amazing and quite believable as it would take both of them to know each other well enough to trust each other to learn magic, and by default of that by Gwen finding out by being with Morgana also makes sense and her being so accepting of it as to her being his best friend is also a stroke of genius.
But your Arthur in this was so heartbreakingly sweet and muddled yet also hopeful that he could finally have what he wanted and then worried that again his sister had beaten him to something he just wanted for himself. The way you voiced his jealousy of her being able to be and do so many things without a thought rings so true to this Arthur from the show and it only further shows how well you know this character and how well you write him :) And the kissing at the end was phenomenal lol Was a puddle of goo at the end of it.
Sorry about the long winded reply, but I adored this and along with all your other fic as well you are becoming my favorite author of Arthur and Merlin fanfics lol
Btw, how is your other fic regarding the junkie Merlin coming along ?
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Date: 2009-10-10 12:48 pm (UTC)But your Arthur in this was so heartbreakingly sweet and muddled yet also hopeful that he could finally have what he wanted and then worried that again his sister had beaten him to something he just wanted for himself. The way you voiced his jealousy of her being able to be and do so many things without a thought rings so true to this Arthur from the show and it only further shows how well you know this character and how well you write him :) And the kissing at the end was phenomenal lol Was a puddle of goo at the end of it.
Sorry about the long winded reply, but I adored this and along with all your other fic as well you are becoming my favorite author of Arthur and Merlin fanfics lol
Btw, how is your other fic regarding the junkie Merlin coming along ?