AH! I somehow missed the last update! I'm so pleased with this story! I feel like now we're starting to move towards the big action, lots of setting up and establishing of secondary characters. So fantastic!
I absolutely adore Leon. I love your characterization of Arthur. The interactions between Morgana, Merlin, Lance, and Gwen are fantastic. It's wonderful to see how Merlin is beginning to find a place where he can be safe and fit in (though...how much can he really fit in when he's a V? That's a blessing and a burden which will always set him apart.)
I'm dying to know how you're going to play the "cure" storyline. I keep imagining the scene in the movie, and while I have no clue if you're story will end up there, I do remember how wonderful it was to finally see Warren/Angel break free from his father's control, and I can't wait to see Arthur find his way to a point where he can have a similar moment (though with the way his mind is working now, he has quite a way to go yet).
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Date: 2011-03-27 02:57 am (UTC)I absolutely adore Leon. I love your characterization of Arthur. The interactions between Morgana, Merlin, Lance, and Gwen are fantastic. It's wonderful to see how Merlin is beginning to find a place where he can be safe and fit in (though...how much can he really fit in when he's a V? That's a blessing and a burden which will always set him apart.)
I'm dying to know how you're going to play the "cure" storyline. I keep imagining the scene in the movie, and while I have no clue if you're story will end up there, I do remember how wonderful it was to finally see Warren/Angel break free from his father's control, and I can't wait to see Arthur find his way to a point where he can have a similar moment (though with the way his mind is working now, he has quite a way to go yet).
Once again, can't wait for the next update!