I like the way you alternate the events from the show. The troll incident was great. Much better planned and without Merlin running around the castle when he should be waiting somewhere close to Arthur. I especially appreciated that you lowered down the amount of the bracelets in Aredian's cupboard. And jealous!Merlin when Arthur and Gwen were bonding. :-) Great chapter!
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Date: 2011-01-08 06:57 pm (UTC)The troll incident was great. Much better planned and without Merlin running around the castle when he should be waiting somewhere close to Arthur.
I especially appreciated that you lowered down the amount of the bracelets in Aredian's cupboard.
And jealous!Merlin when Arthur and Gwen were bonding. :-)
Great chapter!