What a wonderful review! I agree with everyting you said.

I couldn't understand either why people were complaining the relationship between Merlin and Freya developed too fast. I, for one, could totally see why it developed so quickly, and you found the right words for it. Thank you! :o)

I also like to add to this matter that Lancelot and Gwen only met a couple of times, too, before he left Camelot. And the next time they met they've already sworn eternal love to each other ... ;o) Sorry, just a thought ... ^^