ext_149055 ([identity profile] nyxelestia.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nyxelestia 2009-10-10 03:06 pm (UTC)

Thanks for the critiques! (Though on the note of 'yea', it's to change the pronounciation from "yah" of 'yeah' to "yeh" of 'yea' - half the people I meet say 'yea' is "yay", the other half say it's "yeh", so...*shrugs*)

And I'm glad you liked the sword bit. I wanted the confession to happen in the episode, too, so I put it in here. ^_^

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