ext_12405 ([identity profile] texan-elf.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nyxelestia 2009-10-10 02:58 pm (UTC)

*claps madly* Wonderful! Just wonderful.
Love all the characters as you wrote them. I don't know what would be my favorite part. I loved it all. Hmm, maybe Morganna's machinations and the amusement of the castle staff (kitchen help thrusting the picnic basket upon them - ex.) and the yummy angst of Merlin/Arthur. Poor Arthur, he suffered so well. It certainly pleased this reader.

little question - did you mean shocked look on 'his' face? It might be just me, I really need to go get some sleep. :)
They both turned their heads, and Morgana waved with a smile, freezing as she noticed the shocked look on her face.

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