http://bookflight.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] bookflight.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nyxelestia 2011-03-13 05:59 am (UTC)

Love the introduction of the Academy (and the Hogwarts comparison). I'm very curious to how Merlin will interact with the other students. It will certainly be an interesting adjustment for him. Also, I like how you've maintained this older, rebel persona for the Gwaine/Wolverine character. It's allowing for that wonderful dynamic that Rogue and Wolverine have(at least, that they have in the films). However, for me the real shining, brilliant moment of this chapter was the interlude with Arthur. I love how he has this internal mantra of sorts about when he'll be a "real" person again. Heartbreaking.

As always, eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

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